마이클샘이 오늘 수업에 대해 친절히 코멘트도 남겨주셨네요.
주찬군이 운석이 공기때문에 사라진다고 말하자
마이클 샘은 운석이 대기권에 들어오면서 기화(vaporize) 된다고 교정해 주셨어요.
항상 토픽을 미리 읽고 준비해서 마이클샘과 멋진대화 나누길 응원합니다.
Teacher's advice
Hello Noah
I had a great time helping you learn more this evening. I hope you learned a lot. You did great! Work on your grammar especially learn how to use propositions, prepositional phrases, and verb conjugation, because doing that will greatly improve your English grammar and speaking fluency. You should try to improve your grammar in general try reading English novels out loud to yourself for about thirty minutes a day. I'm looking forward to hearing from you during our next class.
Areas to Improve
1. We see some of them because they look like little flying fireballs in sky.
Correction: We see some of them because they look like little flying fireballs in the sky.
2. I were at the village. The village is at the mountainside.
Correction: I live in a village located in the mountains.
Alternative: I live in a mountain village.
3. I'm Sangju.
Correction: I live in Sangju.
4. It look like a rocket that is falling down.
Correction: It looked like a rocket that was falling to Earth.
5. Maybe it will disappear because of the air.
Correction: I think most of them vaporize when they enter the atmosphere.
